Inner demons - poem

[mojib]

Inner Demons

The biting, the burning, the fighting, stomache's churning.
It's evil, so sinful, so cruel and delicious.
O why, yeah.....now I remember.
Deep from within, conquer that sin,
you know and I know that I will give in.

Bloodstained my soul, beyond my blade,
damned now, I'm so full of sickness and hate.
Try to collapse, just give it in,
IT's hurting me, burning me, deep down within.

Battles I've fought, memories unsought,
bringing me, bringing me down, into the ground.
So hard to resist, the lull of the fist,
as it tears and breaches I just can't resist.

Fighting to give, I easily take,
biting now, biting now, the bloodlust has wake.
Empty my soul, empty within,
you know and I know that I will give in.

The hordes that I lead, pities that bleed,
smashing them, burning them, hurting them,
NOW.

-this is my first post in Temper's Ball, hopefully you enjoyed it.

[*Kain*]

not bad at all. I did start a general poem thread that anyone is welcome to, this way we don't get a bunch of other threads with just one or two poems in here. Anyhow good poem