I've just placing this here so that people who have any comments on the story line or questions can post what's on their mind.
Also if you think you'd like to add to it, character wise then post a quick description of your idea and I'll see if it fits in with the way I see this progressing.
From time to time I'll also post some background stuff, but I want to remain tightlipped about a few of the plot developments for the time being.
Thanks.