And in the End...(OOC)

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And in the End...(OOC)

Postby Malik » Tue Jun 08, 2004 2:46 am

Roleplay thread pending...(expected to be posted tomorrow evening/night)

This thread will be reserved for commentary on the roleplay thread once it has begun. The rp will be closed. I'm just looking for constructive criticism. If, however, once the story has progressed, you feel you could add to it by joining, please PM me and we will discuss the possibility of working you into the story.
Look not mournfully into the past. It comes not back again.
Wisely improve the present. It is thine.
Go forth to meet the shadowy future, without fear.
For their sake, the end must not come too soon.
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Postby Therese » Wed Jul 28, 2004 4:16 pm

So I've always been a slow writer. So sue me. *grins*
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Postby owly » Thu Aug 19, 2004 6:17 pm

i really like it, i hope you guys carry on with it...

So i can read some more, story line rocks it was the opening line that caught my attention. Sorry no criticism by me though, i just like it, so i hope i'm not intruding here.
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Postby Mykayla » Fri Aug 20, 2004 12:07 pm

*laughs* I'll take encouragement as well as criticism. Thanks!
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Postby Malik » Mon Oct 04, 2004 9:55 pm

I'd apologize for being slow, but frankly, I don't think anyone really cares. This thread will get written at its own pace.
Look not mournfully into the past. It comes not back again.
Wisely improve the present. It is thine.
Go forth to meet the shadowy future, without fear.
For their sake, the end must not come too soon.
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Postby Therese » Tue Mar 22, 2005 3:07 am

My turn next then!
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It really is worth fighting for, being brave for, risking everything for.
For my kingdom I am strong.
For my heart I am his.
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Postby Strife L. Leonhart » Tue Mar 22, 2005 9:25 am

I just wanted to take the time to complement the two of you. So far the storyline seems to be rather intriguing and I eagerly await the outcome as to just how this tale shall unfold. Kudos to you and I am greatly anticipating future post from the both of you.
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Postby Adeon » Sun Sep 18, 2005 11:12 pm

Deepest apologies for taking so long.
Above you is the sun and sky. Below you, the ground.
Like the sun, your love should be constant, like the ground, solid.
For my love, I could never leave her.
For my life, how I hate her.
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