In Defense of Earth OOC Comments, Suggestions etc.etc.

[Proteus]

Feel free to comment, suggest stuff and critique away..I am trying to imprive my writing and to do that I need feedback from the people who read my stuff.

[Proteus]

Ok what we know is this:

1. the human race has spread thorughout the Milky Way Galaxy.
2. Warfare as we know it does not exist anymore in regards to humanity
3. An extraterestrial force known as the "Warlords" is coming to human space
4. In an effort to prepare ourselves for a fight that we are in no way prepared for, scientists are seeking the remians of histories greatest Generals.


What might happen:

1. ALexander the Great is dug up and replicated
2. Napoleon is dug up and replicated
3. Patton is dug up and replicated
4. Ceasar is dug up and replicated
5. Different factions control diffrent Generals
6. the Generals have thier own agendas, these are ambitious men
7. Preperations for war are under way
8. A representative from the "Warlords" arrives
9. A mercantile organization makes a pact with the emmisary at the expense of soverignty
10. Eventually all hel breaks loose.

So any body got any suggestions, ideas, criticisms...anyone want to jump in? etc.etc. etc.